Sunday, May 16, 2010

A Day at the American Club





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  2. Time to nitpick your photos.

    The series of photos have relevance to one another, so thats a good thing.

    from the top to bottom.
    1) This is a very good shot. Got nothing to say here but good shot!
    2) Framing here is good. But i find it over exposed.
    3) Yup another good shot here. The orange background is too distracting. but you made a decent vignette. but the compromise there was some parts became underexposed.
    4) My Favorite shot among your series. Your 2 subjects are looking away from one another. and the size difference is very evident and theres a lot of opposites going on on that shot. i like it. SLOW CLAPS MY FRIENDS! SLOW CLAPS!
    5)This is my least favorite of the series. The emotion of the subject is not visible. I say its too wide. nothing important to see on the background. Either go close for this shot or go thin on the aperture and closer.

    Thats how its done yo!

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